I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 22 June 2016
Metaphors Galore
¨ My mum, she is a peacock and my father he is a night owl. They try to make my sister Jane let go of some of her dreams this is why¨ Jane’s ambitions are a house of cards she piles them up and up never gets to accomplish any of them but always finds new ones it is astonishing how she can pile them up yet never accomplish them (amazing). I wish i could do that but i think my way is still better all i do is.
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