Today we are still learning about New Zealand. For the first activity we have to write 3 things we could do to help New Zealand and make it beautiful for generations to come. For the second activity we have to take a picture of ourselves doing something we find relaxing. For the bonus activity we have to write a description or make a video about our week and what we enjoyed, what was challenging, what we did, what surprised us and what we learned.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 28 September 2017
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Hi Talia, I am Paige. I like your drawing that you made it is impressive. When I was making mine it was so hard to make the body. Maybe next time you could right how much points we are getting.
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Paige
Hi Paige thank-you for you feedback. Next time I will try to remember to write the points.
DeleteMaybe you could try looking at a picture of what you are wanting your body to look like and then you may have a better idea on how to make it.
Wow! I really like how you put in pictures and drawings in your sideshow. maybe you could make it look better next time.
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Thanks Jed for your comment next time I will try and make it look better. Thanks again for your feeback hopefully it helps in the future.
DeleteThanks Jed for your comment next time I will try and make it look better. Thanks again for your feeback hopefully it helps in the future.
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