Hello New School Farewell New School
For literacy we had to write a poem about the new school. I decided to do some comparing to make it more interesting. I had to write how I feel about the school, and our 5 senses.
Back then I smelt the musty rooms, now I smell the paint fumes.
Back then I heard the trees swishing and wishing, now I hear the squeals of excitement coming from us kids.
Back then I saw the senior fort, now I see the freshly built buildings.
Back then I felt the rough walls and the bumpy floors, now I
Feel the fluffy walls and soft carpets.
I feel as lucky as monkey even though I feel as if I am abandoning the old and amazingly awesome school.
Do you have any feed back for me?
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