This we have been learning how to write a complex sentence and paragraph using complex sentences and simple sentences.
When the big scary monster made of rock walked through the stone while a little lady yelled at the top of her lungs.
The tiny girl screamed at the top of her lungs as the stone monster cam barging through the fog.
A young man was taking a stroll in the forest when suddenly an army of ants dragged him to the ground.
When an army of ants dragged a boy to the ground he realized had ants in his pants.
A family were cozeying up in bed when giant aliens attacked there castle. Everyone ran away from the aliens. It was very dark. It was very scary. The aliens were trying to suck up as many people as possible.
Hi Talia, I am Miro from Awahono School. I like your complex sentences because you use very interesting words in the sentences. Maybe next time you could highlight the complex words on your last sentences.
ReplyDeleteHi Miro, Thank-you for your comment. I will do my best to change that last sentence.
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