I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Talia, I'm Miro from Awahono School. I like your slideshow about fruits and vegetables and their differences, you even taught me a new vegetable that I had never heard about! Maybe next time you could make your poster bigger so that I can read the writing easier.
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Hi Talia, I'm Miro from Awahono School. I like your slideshow about fruits and vegetables and their differences, you even taught me a new vegetable that I had never heard about! Maybe next time you could make your poster bigger so that I can read the writing easier.
ReplyDeleteHi Miro, Thank-you for you comment. I will try and change my poster size when I have the chance. Thanks again for your feedback
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