This is the fireworks poem that I made. It is an acrostic poem . I had to think about how fire works look sound and how they make me feel.
Fire balls sparkling like a star
Instantly feeling happy
Realizing how pretty the are
Even when the shoot so high
Wishing they would never stop
Or at least go on for hours
Racing up and down
Keeping warm and cozy
So much fun can’t wait to come again
Do you have any feedback for me?
Realizing how pretty the are
Even when the shoot so high
Wishing they would never stop
Or at least go on for hours
Racing up and down
Keeping warm and cozy
So much fun can’t wait to come again
Do you have any feedback for me?
Wow! Talia you have done such an amazing job. since I went that says the whole part about fireworks but maybe next time you could put how it smelt and what it sounded like other then that you did an amazing job well done!
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