I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Talia,Chloe here I really like how you have said your opinion on what sustainability is to you. I also like the layout of your slides. Next time you could possibly add more information on what the slides are about.
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Hey Talia,Chloe here
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have said your opinion on what sustainability is to you. I also like the layout of your slides. Next time you could possibly add more information on what the slides are about.