What Does Success Mean To Me?

The last 2 days we have been making a google drawing about what success means to us. I wrote four things, Theses are the things that I think success means. I think that success is very important if you want a job or to be a nice and kind person.

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Hello New School Farewell New School

Hello New School Farewell New School

For literacy we had to write a poem about the new school. I decided to do some comparing to make it more interesting. I had to write how I feel about the school, and our 5 senses.

Back then I smelt the musty rooms, now I smell the paint fumes.

Back then I heard the trees swishing and wishing, now I hear the squeals of excitement coming from us kids.

Back then I saw the senior fort, now I see the freshly built buildings.

Back then I felt the rough walls and the bumpy floors, now I

Feel the fluffy walls and soft carpets.

I feel as lucky as monkey even though I feel as if I am abandoning the old and amazingly awesome school.

                                                   

Do you have any feed back for me?