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Thursday 19 October 2017

Hello New School Farewell New School



Hello New School Farewell New School
For literacy we had to write a poem about the new school. I decided to do some comparing to make it more interesting. I had to write how I feel about the school, and our 5 senses.


Back then I smelt the musty rooms, now I smell the paint fumes.


Back then I heard the trees swishing and wishing, now I hear the squeals of excitement coming from us kids.


Back then I saw the senior fort, now I see the freshly built buildings.


Back then I felt the rough walls and the bumpy floors, now I
Feel the fluffy walls and soft carpets.


I feel as lucky as monkey even though I feel as if I am abandoning the old and amazingly awesome school.


                                                   


Do you have any feed back for me?