Fireworks Poem

This is the fireworks poem that I made. It is an acrostic poem . I had to think about how fire works look sound and how they make me feel.

Fire balls sparkling like a star

Instantly feeling happy
Realizing how pretty the are
Even when the shoot so high
Wishing they would never stop
Or at least go on for hours
Racing up and down
Keeping warm and cozy
So much fun can’t wait to come again

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What Does Success Mean To Me?

The last 2 days we have been making a google drawing about what success means to us. I wrote four things, Theses are the things that I think success means. I think that success is very important if you want a job or to be a nice and kind person.

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