Learning goals

These goals are for the very first yellow goal: Have a positive attitude to all parts of learning including setbacks.

• I will make sure I’m not hungry when I go to class so i can be positive.
• I will make sure that I get a good sleep the nights before school so I’m positive towards learning
• I will also make sure I eat breakfast so I'm not hangry during class.

Inspired writing

The past few weeks we have been working on poetry and we had to start with a

simple sentence then add more detail to make it better. We had categories to choose from
such as space, fantasy and animals.

1. The girl swam in the water.
2. The girl swam in the deep blue water.
3. The girl glided like a gold fish through the deep blue water .
4. The girl glided like a gold fish through the deep blue water actively trying to escape the sharks.
5. Fearfully, the girl glided like a gold  fish through the deep blue shark infested waters
6. actively trying to escape them.
7. Fearfully, the girl glided like a gold  fish through the deep blue shark infested waters actively trying to escape them. Her only help being the faint light she held to keep track of the sharks whereabouts.

Fearfully, the girl glided like a gold  fish through the deep blue shark infested waters actively trying to escape them. Her only help being the faint light she held to keep track of the sharks whereabouts.

This is supposed to be my best sentence/s but I don't like its too detailed it sounds strange.

The meaning of the colours:

Vocab: R4 because I added similes and adjectives.