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Friday 17 March 2017

Looking Forward To Autum

     Looking Forward To Autumn

I can’t wait to smell the fresh bright green grass.

I can’t wait to taste the warm hot chocolate bubbling in my mouth.

I can’t wait to see the red orange and brown leaves flutter down from the trees.

Here comes Autumn

I can’t wait to feel the leaves hit my face in a leaf fight.

I can’t wait to hear the leaves crunch under my wet feet.

Here comes Autumn.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Talia, I like how you used adjectives in your writing. Maybe next time you could put pictures in. I like how you wrote (I can’t wait to feel the leaves hit my face in a leaf fight) I like that sentence.

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