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Tuesday 26 February 2019

The Vinegar Was Too Sharp!- 100 Words

It was a Friday afternoon and we were all doing our work it was nice and relaxed when Whaea Raewyn left the room and she had left a plate of cookies on her desk so naturally I poured some vinegar on them. When she entered the room again she picked up the plate of cookies I thought   This is it this is the moment.  I really wasn't expecting what came next… “ Well since you guys have been so well behaved you can have a cookie each !” “ Oh No not the cookies, please not the cookies.”

The vinegar was too sharp!


Today we had to make a short story, 100 words to be exact.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Talia, Its Sharney from 7/8Sh. I like how you tried to prank the teacher but it back fired on you.
    Where did you get the vinegar from? Maybe Next time you are doing writing you could write more to the story. You could've write how they tasted, anyway I really enjoyed reading your story it was funny.

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